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Nice lip sync. Keep it up!

WinterSpray responds:

Thank You for your Feedback

Even when you do animatic stuff like this it still turns out great haha. Keep up the good work bro

wow look @ that lil guy go!!!!

This cartoon made me go “jajajajajajajaja”

what if unleased was called “leashed”???? haha that was one of my glassics :3

How are you able to consistently make these while also working in TV? Please, I want to learn you miraculous ways!

Aaron-Long responds:

My dirty secret is that I got some time off from work between seasons this summer! Although I started writing this set of S&TM episodes during the end of Bojack season 4. Now that I'm back at work, the next one might take longer.

I'm in this

Azoko responds:

You're

Ben, I just want to say that this is very mediocre, and you can do a lot better than this. I'm not trying to discourage you from making Bentoons or anything in general. The fact that you spent three years on this and kept going anyway is impressive. I have cartoons from a few months ago that I can't even be bothered to finish. But at the same time you went along with making a mediocre Eddsworld clone with Ren and Stimpy sound effects. You can do so much better than this, Ben. I'm pretty sure that even you can admit that this isn't your best effort. Not everyone's first cartoon is a masterpiece, but this seems like you decided to go along with it just for the sake of having a cartoon out rather than having something your proud of. Now, To be fair, maybe you are proud of this. But I just want to help you out and tell you what you need to improve on: First of all, Make the characters personalities a lot more visible. I can barely tell any of these guys apart. Secondly, improve the dialogue and voice acting. It feels very wooden and bland. Finally, improve the colors. Explore outside the typical primary colors. make the colors slightly more duller (or brighter). It depends on the scene.

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