ColeDawg's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OneyPlays ANIMATED : GTA 5 with Mods]

This cartoon was just meh. Personally the only thing I somewhat liked was the lip sync, and even that was off at times. Oh, and the colors and the facial expressions are alright too. The character animation was bad, tho. I think the worst part was when Oney walked away after saying "There's poo poo on the floor". Also, I want to thank you for making the intro take up half of the cartoon!!! Seriously, don't make it that long.

[Carl Comedy]

You just stole random clipart and put it into your cartoon. Look, If you can't draw, just ask someone to animate this for you. Using clipart makes you look incredibly lazy and unprofessional. As for the plot, it goes all over the place. First he's at the hospital, then he's at the store, and then it ends? Huh? The plot went by way too fast and there's no pacing whatsoever. He's at the hospital then he's at the store. No explanation why, he's just at the store and then he says "That chocolate bar is 500 bucks huhuhuh". Did him jumping off the bridge give him brain damage or is he just a dumb kid? No explanation to anything. You didn't introduce the characters. I know this is your first submission so I'm going to go easy on you. Hopefully in the future your cartoons get better.

GeorgeGardeyAnimatio responds:

lmao i made this in 5th grade

[SleepyCast Animated - Unreleased Family Guy Episode]

Even though there was a lack of animation in this, which knocks off a fair amount of points, The art was pretty decent, although next time I recommend the cartoon would look better if you didn't boil it. You did a great job picking out an excellent moment from the podcast, as it made me giggle quite a bit. So, I guess you did an okay job.

[Crust]

Whoa, this is really good.

[Desert Car]

Short, but simple. Pretty good for your first animation. I think the fire could have had a bit more detail but that's just nit-picking so I'll just say it's a good toon